Thursday, April 22, 2010

Oh...My sweet Home..!!






Oh my sweet home I am missing you too much, I see people going home and my heart goes down
I remember all those sweet and precious moments I had there, I never thought while leaving i will miss you this much here

You have nothing special to be admired...Just a place to stay with family
But it is the place where I spent my whole life, shared all the bad and good time with you
I remember the fights I had with my siblings...and you were the best one among all buildings
Though roofs were leaking under heavy rain...But you never brought me loneliness and pain

I think of you and my grand-mom comes in my mind....and I remember no one will be anywhere so kind
The place where someone was giving me bed tea's ...and each of my silly demand was making them tease
We played almost all the games... I remember our funny activities and silly aims
Feeling there the fresh air there in my vain...I don’t know when I will come there to feel it again

It was very good to run for catching a kite...and roaming here and there in dark when there was no light
I admit I participated in all games of dolls...and we jumped high walls to find our lost balls
I still have the taste of grandma's cooking... All things were so tasty and we were never boozing
I loved you so much that I never wanted to leave you even for going school...because home was the only place where I can rule

There is no place like you...where some one feels like so true...
Where someone can have the real rest....among all the places I visited you are the best
Now to reach to my home is not so ease...but that place really brings me the real peace
oh my sweet home there is no place like you....Oh my sweet home there is no place like you
I wanna come back so soon....I wanna come back so soon!!

Oh my sweet home I am missing you too much, I see people going home and my heart goes down
I remember all those sweet and precious moments I had there, I never thought while leaving i will miss you this much here

7 comments:

  1. This one is the best so far, loved it for the nostalgia, beautifully crafted emotions and sense of belonging. And nice way of presenting and command over rhyming for a difficult theme.

    you are rocking now:-) Sail on !!!

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  2. hey nice yaar :)
    I love my home too,thats why going there :) :)

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  3. This is really awesome Girish...
    Touched my heart and now m feeling lil low and want to be at home...
    Keep on posting such poems....

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  4. i thought u wrote on your own..hmm u just did copy-past...hmm..
    http://www.yousaytoo.com/oh-my-sweet-home/258565
    :-D

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  5. I wrote by my own only...I have a profile at yousaytoo...and that's how it got posted there...I am wondering how?

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  6. Be happy with what you have..while working for what you want..& well that's true desires never ends...........

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